THEN WHO WAS PHONE?

                   Alright, you know that this pasta is going to be important if I named my blog after it. WHO WAS PHONE? as it is often called, is the most famous "troll pasta" there is. A troll pasta is a more than often a parody of a creepypasta, designed to be humorous, rather than scary. So, if I'm supposed to be reviewing scary pasta, why even bother with something like this. Well, as embarrassing as it is, I feel...that this pasta is the most important in all of the creepypasta library. For those of you who have read this pasta, you will either facepalm, or ask what illegal narcotic I am currently hopped up on. For those of you who haven't, well, I hope you aren't drinking anything, because if you are, prepare for massive beverage ejection. Here is the most important pasta in all creation.

'So ur wid yo honi and ur makin out wen the phone ringz. U ansr it n da voice sayz "wut r u doin wit ma daughter?"

u tel ur girl n she say "ma dad is ded."

THEN WHO WAS PHONE?' 

                    Well. It appears that I may have bitten off more than I can chew with this one. This has to be the most jumbled mess of a pasta I have ever read. And I have read a lot of them. I guess I have no choice now. You're all just waiting to see how I'm going to possibly make head or tail of this abomination. 

                     Initial Thoughts: 

                    I thank God that I am not an English teacher. The sheer amount of gammarical errors in this "story" are so immense, it's amazing that I can even find one scrap of story in it. How did this possibly become so famous? No doubt it's that last line, the absolute pinnacle of internet cultural keyboard face rolling. There is absolutely no way that this was accidental. There is thought behind this incompetency. Deep and utter guile in the placements of misspellings. So, where to begin? 

                   The Fame: 

               

                   I think this story fits quite nicely in the 'so bad its good' category, a category solely held for movies written by, starring, and directed by Tommy Wiesau. The story is bad, and I wouldn't let it near the children anytime soon, but there is a kind of Tiny Tim charm to it. Also, that line has become meme history. Don't know what a meme is? Then you shouldn't be on the internet. 

                 The Importance: 

                  Enough beat around the bush. It has sassed us enough. Why do I think this that story is so important. Well, if you remember back to my first post, I listed off structure points of creepypasta. Well, as broken as this...thing is, it actually has the most important elements propping it up, like a baby on crutches made of titanium. Let's break it down. 

'So ur wid yo honi and ur makin out-

                  Alright stop. Here is the most important part of any creepypasta. The sense of normalcy. Yes, it looks like it was run through a paper cutter equipped blender with a bear mauling at the end, but it's recognizable. He's just making out with his girlfriend. What's wrong with that? Well, it's either that, or he has mouth in a talking jar of honey. That would actually make this story scary. 

wen the phone ringz.

So, what do we have here. Well, this is the part where things begin to stir, or when the sense of normalcy begins to wear on itself. So, this unnamed guy is interrupted by a phone call. Still pretty normal. In fact a little too normal. This is ASCENDED NORMALCY. 

 U ansr it n da voice sayz "wut r u doin wit ma daughter?"

So this is where the horror escalates. If there was any. Yeah, it isn't scary. Unless you start to think about why a jar of honey has a father. Then we start having problems.  

u tel ur girl n she say "ma dad is ded." 

THEN WHO WAS PHONE?' 

This should be pretty obvious. This is the big twist. The one that makes you rethink about what you have just  read. And shudder. Or in this case, wonder what just happened, and then agonize a corner of your house, normally populated by the dust bunny king, that you just never had the moxie to defeat. It is confusing to say the least. It is so...WRONG but it feel so right. Why? What is it about those four words that eludes all explanation, and yet sticks in your mind like a surgeon's scapal? WHO WAS PHONE has become a meme, and a running joke on /x/, the great kingdom of creepypasta, made of glass and fermenting cabbage. So, with all of this, why is it important. The REAL reason. 

                      Well...

            Here's my thoughts. Think back to my urban legend argument, and also to any urban legends that you have heard. Think back to how many of those start with two people making out, or planning on it? Yeah, see. Like 3, maybe four. However, despite the lack of ones that I can think about at the top of my head, the most famous urban legend is arguably, The Hook. Yeah, we all know it. Two kids making out with mad loot in the back of the car. The radio, who got jealous of the two, blasts some news story, crazy maniac, hook on car, who was phone. What I'm getting at is...WHO WAS PHONE is the middle ground between the urban legends of yesteryear, and the modern internet creepypastas. It has all of the makings of an urban legend (making out, creepy phone call, dead father, etc) but with that internet flavor (like sprinkling cholera on a hot dog. It so internet-ish (scientific term) and so much like an urban legend, it just falls in between in a big spectacular mess. 

                     Conclusion: 

               So, with all of that broom bashing, what do I think of WHO WAS PHONE? Well, the fact that I named my blog after it might have something to say about it. But other than that, I love it. The first time I read this, I laughed like a loon, and from that point on, I have always looked back on it as a staple of creepypasta lore. I will also reference it from time to time, like the little internet junkie I am. 

                     Rating: 

             I suppose I could measure each and every point of why this is a great pasta. But that would be point less. Screw it. 

                     Yeah...I think I can sleep easy knowing that I gave it that score. Next time...let's look at the first creepypasta I ever read...when I was actually conscious that I was reading a creepypasta. Cause the first one I ever read, well. We'll save that one.                          

Sorry...

There's going to be a bit of a delay in the next posting. I'll try to get it out as soon as possible.

An Introduction Into the World of Creepypasta.

                 
                      Before I start, I suppose the best course of action would be to discuss what a creepypasta is, at least for those who don't know (my mom is probably going to look at this once. Only once.). The most basic definition of a creepypasta is an urban legend told on the internet. Really, when you boil it down, that's all that it is. Let's look at the definition of an urban legend, according to Merriam Webster:

 'an often lurid story or anecdote that is based on hearsay and widely circulated as true. 

                 Gee, thanks Merriam Webster, that really proved my point. Well, let's break it down, the right way. Simply put, a creepypasta is a story told on the internet that is designed to shock, disturb, and soil the pants of the reader. Most, if not all creepypastas come from the /x/ board of 4-chan. They're usually (usually) short, and have twist endings designed to leave a lasting impact (for better or worse) on the reader. As for the name (as it is very...what's the word...retarded), it is actually a derivative of another internet word, copypasta, which in of itself is a bastardization of two words, copy and paste. This is called that because that's how these stories get around. Some loon writes it, posts it, and some other loon copies and pastes it somewhere else. That's how these stories get around. Of course, 95% of you already know this, so I suppose I should get on with it.
                    Now, since Merriam Webster was VERY unhelpful in proving my point, I guess I will have to sully my hands in description. Creepypasta and urban legends are similar in the fact that they both take place in the real world ( sort of). I mean, it's recognizable as the real world, and the people are recognizable. That's what makes them scary and endearing. On top of that, both creepypasta and urban legends are told by word of mouth. Well, in the internet's case, it's copy and pasted. So it goes from person to person, maybe changing here and there, until it becomes ingrained into your subconscious brain. Now, no one can walk ten feet into the internet without seeing someone referencing Slenderman or something like that. Thus, there's the connection.
                    Alright, time to talk about creepypasta themselves. From my experience in reading creepypasta, I have found that every creepypasta pretty much shares the same structure. No matter how long, or how frightening they are, every pasta has very similar structures. Some may deviate from this path, but they all have at least one or two of these structural points.

                    1) "A MAN WAS WALKING DOWN A ROAD": Otherwise known as "The Sense of Normalcy." As I mentioned before, creepypasta has a sound structure in reality. Otherwise, it's not a creepypasta. It's either a man walking down a road, cause his car broke down, or someone going caving with his friend, the pasta has to start out in a location that we all recognize.

                    2) "This is when things began to seem off.": AKA, "Things Begin To Stir". This is the point where something begins to feel wrong. The sense of normalcy is slowly being corroded at the edges. In a proper pasta, nothing actually scary has happened yet, but the feeling that something is going to happen, has gotten up from its chair in the back of the room, and has started to walk towards the front. It can be anything from a misplaced doll, a door that you swore that you shut, or perhaps a feeling that something isn't right.

                   3) "He woke up screaming.": Or what I like to call, "The Horror Begins". This is where the lines that separates the normal and the abnormal snaps in two. All of those dark things flood in, and sucker punch you, leaving you to question what the hell just hit you. In other words, this is where the story starts to get scary, but it hasn't shown its full hand...yet. Perhaps someone has died, or there was a dark shadow lurking outside your window.

                   4) "i don't think that was a dream.": "The Horror Escalates." Now the horror has revealed itself. You can now make out the lines in the sand, and where things have aligned. However, despite knowing what the horror looks like, you don't know what its intentions are, and what it's going to do next. Maybe you've seen the monster. Perhaps there's claw marks on the walls. Whatever it is, the ride has yet to finish, so don't jump off yet.

                 5) "Cleverbot: 'Cables and cords.'": The penultimate part, or as I like to call, "The Horror Climaxes". This is where the horror can not progress any further. It has spent all of its cards, but one (we'll get to that in a sec). This is where the the main character can't take it anymore, he/she must act. Whether it's eat, or be eaten, the character must decide. Well, this part can take on more forms than that, but that's just an example.

                 6) "THEN WHO WAS PHONE?": "The Twist." Most, if not all creepypasta have a twist ending, that makes you question what you just read. The best twist endings are the ones that you don't get right away, leaving you wondering what the hell just happened. Then it dawns on you, and it is in that moment, that you realize that you will not be getting any sleep that night. If the twist can make you re-read the whole story again, then you know it has done a good job.

                And that's where babies come from. Now that you know how creepypastas are structured, now I can go over some of the different types of pasta. Bet you never thought that some stupid stories from the internet went into so many different categories, did you?

               
                 1) Deal with the Devil: These stories are not really stories, but instructions. These tell you how to gain power unheard of to humans, insight that no one else has, or hell, it could just give you D.B. Cooper's whereabouts. However, these instructions MUST be followed exactly, or else you are going to be dragged straight to hell. Or something similar. An example of which: The Holders Series.

                 2) Pokemon: You laugh, but these things are everywhere. It is probably one of, if not THE most prevalent type of creepypasta out there. Mostly it has something to do with someone's Pokemon game gone wrong, either killing the player, or mentally scarring them for life. I guess it's the thought of something so innocent being so dark. Then again, the actual Pokemon games have some pretty dark stuff already Examples include: Pokemon Creepy Black, Lost Silver, Lavender Town Suicides, etc.

                 3) Lost Episodes: Basically some kid's show, or something along those lines, having some satanic stuff in an episode, causing the show in question to cover it up. Either the story is told from the viewpoint of some intern who was working on the show at the time, or some obsessive fan seeking the episode out. Usually it involves dead children. In some way or another. Examples include: Squidward's Suicide, Dead Bart, Cry Baby Lane, Candle Cove, etc.

                4) Video Games: Since videogames play a big part in internet culture, it should come as no surprise that many creepypasta involve video games gone bad. This goes in the same vein as the Pokemon one. Usually some kid's game like Mario, or Zelda goes bad, and then it scars the player for life. Or in some cases, haunts them. Examples include: BEN: Haunted Majora's Mask, Polybius, Tails Doll, etc.

                5) Monsters: Sometimes pastas don't involve anything related to popular culture. Sometimes, people just make up monsters. And, quite frankly, most of these monsters become poster children for creepypastas in general, and get the most coverage. Examples include: Slenderman Mythos, Jeff the Killer, the Rake, etc.

                 6) People: Sometimes, people are strange. These usually involve the mentally unstable. There is (usually) nothing paranormal involved in these stories. Examples include: Dating Game, etc.

                 7) Places: Warning, here there be tygers. If you see a no trespassing sign, just keep driving. This can also include websites. Examples include: Ted the Caver, Normal Porn for Normal People, White with Red, etc.

                 8) Undefined: Some pastas just defy being categorized. So, we throw them into this category of non categorization. Example: SCP Foundation.

                  Now, how do I factor into all of this? Well, I'm going to review creepypasta. When you've finished laughing, allow me to break down how I'm going to do this. I'm going to review each pasta based on how realistic it seems, how well written it is, how engaging the characters are, how scary it is (to me), and how good the twist ending is (if any. If the pasta fulfills one of the requirements with flying colors, it gets a point. Now some elements of the pasta, may outshine others, and therefor, I would have to award some extra points. As you can tell, this is a very lax method of critique, as it should be. Now, here's the rating system.

0/5: Where's the Pasta I Ordered?; Just...no...

1/5: Raw Pasta; Bad. Not scary. All around boring.

2/5: Undercooked Pasta; Below average. some effort involved.

3/5: Cooked Pasta; Not too bad, but not fantastic, needs work.

4/5: Delicious Pasta; Pretty damn good. Covered in spicy sauce, and it makes you want to have it again right after you eat it.

5/5: Chef Boyardee's Greatest Hits; SHIELD YOUR UNWORTHY EYES, YOU FOOLS!



           Well that's that. I hope you and I have a great time reviewing the wild, magical world of creepypasta. The name's Connor, and I have a feeling we'll being seeing each other real soon.


Coming up next...The scariest phone call you will ever have.